Below is a link to the 100wc website.
https://100wc.net/week-13-4/#more-23527
The prompt this week is:
…I didn’t realise they could fly…
Notice that they have used an apostrophe in a contraction and the third person pronoun ‘they’.
Remember what we have spoekn about in terms of positive and progressive peer assessment.
Enjoy!
It was a long day going Christmas shopping. Me and my mum got the bus back home, I was looking out the glass pane and opened my mouth in pure shock! My mum was on her phone while I was frozen in place. ”Mum! Look” I yelled, ”flying pigs!”. Everybody else on the bus looked out then my mum decided to. The bus driver kept looking out the window, he didn’t really pay much attention to the road, but luckily, we didn’t crash. We arrived back in Stockton, our town and the pigs were flying over us! ”I didn’t realise they could fly!” We got home in peace.