Dear Diary,
Today, we have been putting the stock- mark on the sheep so if they go missing they will be easy found. We painted mine with purple this year on their shoulders as we started on the middle of their backs. As they were coming through my favourite one came ,which is nearly the size of a baby elephant , its lamb made £450 last year. Watching the sheep grazing on the rich green pasture is like violin music to my ears. Its happy to watch the lambs really big after a year of looking after them so they make lots of money.
This is a great story because this could be real life and a story! The only thing I would change is you need to have a comma after ‘As they were coming through’ also maybe next week you could change the sheep subject to something more suspenseful?
Well done Alex, keep up the good work!! 🙂
Very good Alex I love the way you have used sheep again 🙂