As I was walking down the street ,I saw all these people walking to this big bee building with gold bees on the out side . I thought it was strange that people were going to this place . me and Rowley wanted to go in but my mum was cooking tea and I had t watch manny when mum dad went out for a meal .Mum dad have just went out the door so me Rowley thought one little sneaky at the bee thing will not .
We have just walked In we realised it was a night club so we partied all night.
MUM HAD A GRUMP.
Well done Dan its a very good story next time try to add commas in but keep up the good work 🙂
I liked your story 🙂