As I journeyed through the jungle, I saw a clearing, it looked like there was an elephant… I finally reached the clearing. I told you there was an elephant but the funny thing is it was using it’s hands to do something. I was so tired I had to rest near a tree to catch my breath (I still didn’t know what it was doing). Then it turned around and showed me something… This made me very happy because he had painted a violin, which was purple. He made a gesture for me to take it so I did.
Even now-30 years later-I’ve still got it above my bed.
I liked your work you used good vocab just try not to use I so much
keep up the effort