Dear Diary this is my year of 2009
Hi it is ava it is the last day of summer I am going to tell you my story of ths summer So I live with my/ mam /little sister /litte brother / and me. my dad left us for another person .right lets get on to the day so I woke upto breckfast in bed .
Positive- I love a good diary entry
Negative- Capital letters, full stops, spellings and sense
You need capital letters and full stops.