It was the night before Christmas me and my mum Rebecca were watching out the window. We were watching for the reindeers walking to my house.They came they were flying.” I didn’t realise they could fly” I said. “Did you know mum?” She didn’t answer so I assumed she already knew.
I looked back to where she was… She wasn’t there… I ran down the stairs and she wasn’t there I couldn’t find her. I went outside she was there and she was just walking about I shouted at her “MUM”.I went in to get my dad and all of a sudden mum shouted “HELP HELP…”
Well done Rhianna!!!
I love the part when you ask your mum if the reindeer can actually fly because the punctuation is very good for the speech! The only thing I would change is you could add more detail to describe the reindeer!!
Keep up the good work!! 🙂