100wc week 7 craig and jake

Posted on 21st October 2020 by JakeBeattie

A young boy named Mike lived in London with his family of 5. It was his birthday and he is now aged 10. He was born in a poor family but danced all night on their concrete path. For the first time ever he got a really present It was a fluffy red scooter. He loved it so much he rode it every night instead of dancing. Suddenly, Mike heard music coming from a large estate building and scooted over there. When he got there he stood outside and stared at the building. Suddenly out of thin air a dark shadow appeared…

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6 Responses to 100wc week 7 craig and jake

  1. OllieMcKeown says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:20

    We really like your post of the journey from being poor to seeing s scary shadow just look at appeared you have spelt it wrong

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  2. RubyErskine says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:23

    next time check your spelling of apeared

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  3. Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) says:
    28th October 2020 at 07:38

    Hello! I am hoping that as Mike followed the music to the building, he still had a love for dancing. The image of him dancing every night is so good. Dancing can bring so much joy to the person dancing as well as those watching. I’m not sure what a “fluffy” red scooter looks like but it sounds like fun. Interesting that you have added mystery to the end of your story. Well done.

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