100wc Week#7(21) jennifer and maja

Posted on 21st October 2020 by MajaJarema

Ginger raced along the concrete  on her scooter. It  started to get dark,  she pulled her red  fluffy  jumper tight to her pounding heart. All of a sudden, a black cat danced out in front of her!  To her surprise , a wicked witch swept her up from her scooter. It was raining heavily,  as fear filled Ginger’s body. When they reached the cottage, the witch muttered a spell staring into her eyes. Then with a  flash, the room filled with murky  fog.  When  she opened her eyes she was a ginger cat!  Ginger flew out the old cottage, where was running…?

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8 Responses to 100wc Week#7(21) jennifer and maja

  1. RubyErskine says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:31

    its absolutely amazing I love it. it was so funny when she turned into a ginger cat

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  2. JackSharpe says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:31

    WONDERFUL MARVELOUS ! good use of suspence and description

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  3. Admin says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:37

    An excellent entry full of description about how she feel – show not tell! I liked the twist in the name as well as she went from being called Ginger to being a ginger cat – this shows you have thought about your entry and been very creative!

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  4. MiaClifford says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:38

    You need a of were the a is after all a

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  5. JakeBeattie says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:41

    I really like how you have related it to Halloween

    from Jake

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