100wcweek#12[21] Emily and Markuss

On  Christmas eve there was a little boy playing In the snow until the little boy sneezed but he didn’t care and went back playing. But he sneezed again so he thought if he had the cold but he didn’t know. Until  he went in side  and told his mum that I think I have the cold. So his mum said  he was really ill because he had a bad cold and then he said why do I have the cold. His mum replied you have the cold because you have been out side to long. So stay inside please.

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3 Responses to 100wcweek#12[21] Emily and Markuss

  1. JackSharpe says:

    hi markuss good story but you have went from third person to first person

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