with sweat dripping of my head i was in the Bahama deserts going for a hike with my friends [ Macbeth Duncan Malcom ] . Under the trees was a poor falcon with a beautiful red wings and a beak that i couldn’t describe . I think he felt really ill. In my leatherd backpack I found a bandage and some medicine . I rapped the bandage around its injured wing and gave it some medicine to help. I felt sorry for it because it was injured so I took it home . Within around 6 or 7 days the wing was healed but sadly I had to let it go.
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Hello Jack, this is a lovely story showing kindness and compassion. I think it conveys a really good message for all of us to care for all creatures that may be injured and unable to care for themselves. A future goal for your writing might be to check on the use of capital letters. Well done.