100wcWeek#12(21) Lewis Tom

On a dull Wednesday, I walked to school and sat in my spot the grumpy teacher Mr mean. He said that we were doing maths and learning perimeter. As soon as I started my best friend Bob asked his partner if he could use the rubber Mr mean stared  and shouted at little Bob. After lunch Mr mean said he had to go because he felt really ill we got a new teacher called Mr brown he let us do what we like! Our headteacher said that Mr Mean had quit coming to our school it was the best day ever.

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2 Responses to 100wcWeek#12(21) Lewis Tom

  1. NiamhMeek says:

    I like your description of changed fronted adverbials and use of exclamation marks in your writing.https://longtownprimary.j2bloggy.com/Y5-100-Word-Challenge/100wc-week1221-niamh-szymon/

  2. IslaWigham says:

    good work, I like how you have done two best friends why don’t you visit ours
    https://longtownprimary.j2bloggy.com/Y5-100-Word-Challenge/

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