100ck week #23 Ellie

one day I found a rode .  I asked my friend if we should go don it and she said yes lick she always dose but we took no notice of the sign we thought it was  just a stop sign for cars but no it was a danger sign  it was full of mice and rats I was scard however …

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2 Responses to 100ck week #23 Ellie

  1. AnastazjaAndrzejewska says:

    Hi ellie ,
    I enjoyed reading this but check your spellings .

  2. ShaneLittle says:

    You forgot to put a capital letter at the start and you spelt road wrong. But I like how your making the characters have bad vision.

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