One day, in my town I was walking a night and I went to the shops in the town. I went to get some food and I met my friend . I said ‘how did you get here’ he said ‘a taxi’ so I took him home. We broke down we seen my friends house and it was just through the wood but there was a sine. We took no notice of the sine we ran though it took longer than it look we heard a noise it sounded like ‘I can see you from behind’ it said it again we finally made it. We were so scared we never went in there again.
On the forth line you had spelt sign wrong.
good story Freddie!!!
Next time make sure that you check it through more
really awesome work Freddie
Dear Freddie,
A brilliant story just check spelling’s and punctuation.
Yours Sincerely,
Mr. Lewis