one moreing I was wakling through the woods with my friends and then we seen a big and old creepy house so we deceided to go in side the house but there was a sigh and a feinc around it so we clambed the feinc and went in said and there was nothing in said then we heard a nock on the door so we sprinted up to the bedrooms and looked out the window and no one was there so we whet out the door and went home to go to bed and woke up the next day and went there again and it wasn’t there.
hi nice work but there is a spelling wrong it is morening its meant to be morning
Good work Oliver but remember your spellings
you for got to add we took no notice of the sign
Nice adjectives but remember to use punctuation.
Keep the work up.
Hi Oliver,
I really like your adjectives about the house. Just remember your punctuation. Very well done!
Dear Oliver,
1.Morning isn’t morening
2.USE PUNCTUATION !!!
I hope you take this advice to become a better writer
Yours Sincerely,
Mr. Lewis