Today was the most mysterious day of my life…
I was on holiday, swimming in the pool whilst playing polo with my sister and brother. On a poster it read out “archery class tonight at 8:00pm. Please (if you can) come tonight. Thank you.”
We went back to the hotel room, got showered and replaced our clothes with elegant, fresh ones.
After that, we went back to the pool ready for the archery class.
A few minutes later – when everyone arrived – the man announced “sorry for the short notice but we have cancelled archery; instead we are playing chess.”
After an hour, we saw the chess it was humongous…
A very well structured entry Natalia – well done. You have used parenthesis extremely well and I’m glad to see you revising it! Try to tighten up your speech punctuation – remember it should look like ,”Sorry for the short notice…”.
Keep up the wonderful writing!