Dear diary,
This day was incredible! We were testing our new canon which came from Greece. The four of us [me, Sam, James and henry] were enjoying the view from the tower. Then all of a sudden, the tower started to shake, we thought it was an earth quake…
Full of interest, we peered out of the wooden window. We saw our dreadful enemies coming towards us in ships with guns and cannons aiming at us ready to fire. This was a surprise attack [they came from Canada]. Luckily, our canon was tested out and aimed at our enemies. HORRAY !
Well done I like the idea about the new cannon it is a really cool and I might take that for next time we do that.
Best one I read so far!