Slowly, Ginger climbed the rotting, creaking stairs. When she reached the top of the stairs, she cautiously turned the handle of the ancient door, the pungent smell bombed her nostrils. She could feel the wood crumbling under her feet.
All of a sudden, the floor gave away sending her into a mysterious room. Every part of her body ached but she still stood up! A grotesque rat scurried across her foot making her scream. As she edged forwards to the door, a sound came from behind it. She opened it with a shudder not knowing what before her but Ginger had to see what was inside…
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whose ginger im wondering but still a very good story full of suspence and description
Ginger the girl, thanks!