100wc week#6[21] Mia & Kayden w

In a deep dark wood, I saw an abandoned mansion  with moss all over I knew I shouldn’t have gone in but I had to see what was inside. I saw something fall from the holed ceiling I had to investigate I thought it was ivy but it ran away like a cheater into the deep dark woods…

I finally caught up, the animal was half cheater, half lion and half snake I screamed like I had saw a murderer that had killed someone. The animal of the dead had ran away when I fell unconscious when I got up I didn’t know what had happened   it was a dream…

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5 Responses to 100wc week#6[21] Mia & Kayden w

  1. MarkussFilipovs says:

    hi mia

  2. MarkussFilipovs says:

    looks good but the hole sealing by markuss

  3. JenniferMiller says:

    Very entertaining

  4. CHRIS MEEHAN says:

    Kia ora from New Zealand Mia and Kayden.
    You have good ideas for your 100 Word Challenge this week, although maybe you let them run away with you a bit towards the end. When you have to write ONLY 100 words, it is about working to chose the very best words to tell your story, so that sometimes takes 3 or 4 days to get right.
    Make sure that you always check your spelling carefully before finally submitting your work. I am thinking that you were wanting to talk about the animal called a CHEETAH, rather than a person who cheats, and that would be a CHEATER.
    Ms M #100WC

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