In Central Park a bee was flying around and annoying everyone in his bee hive suddenly his mastermind dad told him to go outside to test out his new shrink ray but something went wrong…
The shrink ray wasn’t on the wright setting it was on kill but he couldn’t stop it, it had already hit his son he died in a flash. Suddenly,he saw police coming out of the hive he knew he had to leave so he wouldn’t get arrested, investigators took there cameras and lights they didn’t find any clues but they did find a dead bee.
its amazing
There is a lot going on in your story, Mia and Kayden. You have written a very imaginative story using the picture prompt, with lots of action. I like the way you describe how something went wrong. That is just like real life.