100wc

Dear diary,

I am writing to tell you that the most tragic day happened to me. I was on bottom deck cleaning the cannons quietly but something tragic happened to me a dynamite ball came and hit our ship. I was petrified ,the bottom deck was poring with water . As quick as I could I shot a bomb at their ship and flee to top deck and told captain pegleg he had one eye a peg leg and old rags as clothes.

It sank I was on a piece of wood with pegleg and then we found land and saved.

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2 Responses to 100wc

  1. LewisLittle says:

    YOU FORGOT A COMMA

  2. OllieMcKeown says:

    Hi its ollie and markuss please can you use a comma after could thank you

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