Dear diary,
I am writing to tell you that the most tragic day happened to me. I was on bottom deck cleaning the cannons quietly but something tragic happened to me a dynamite ball came and hit our ship. I was petrified ,the bottom deck was poring with water . As quick as I could I shot a bomb at their ship and flee to top deck and told captain pegleg he had one eye a peg leg and old rags as clothes.
It sank I was on a piece of wood with pegleg and then we found land and saved.
YOU FORGOT A COMMA
Hi its ollie and markuss please can you use a comma after could thank you