Paige drove in her spectacular vehicle, while JasmineĀ waited at her doorstep for her to come. When she arrived, she played music on her recorder and climbed the tree in the back garden, followed by Jasmine. They played with the furry rabbits called Marshmallow and Lazer. Paige walked very slowly up the stairs and they went to bed. Jasmine woke Paige up and she went home. The next day, Jasmine had a sleepover at Paige’s house. They saw there friend Sophie and they all played out. After that, they had tea went to bed and in the morning jasmine went home.
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Hi there,
What a lovely piece of writing, you can really tell that Paige and Jasmine are great friends by all that they do together. Next time try to include a problem or an incident to keep things exciting for your reader.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs Moore
Team 100 WC
London