100wcweek#22Demi

Posted on 25th February 2020 by DemiM

I followed  the footsteps through the forest. They were small. I went down the steep steep hill. There it was I had found it… a shed. A door bell. My hand was shivering as it swiped across it with pressure and rang it… The door creaked open ; as I went in the door SLAMMED shut behind me!! I ran around the shed , after a few minutes in that place in the corner off my eye was a doll with blood and a knife. Was this the end of me? Was this the last breath I was ever going to take. As heard the breathing off all the things around me…

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3 Responses to 100wcweek#22Demi

  1. AnastazjaAndrzejewska says:
    25th February 2020 at 13:49

    I like how u used small sentences ( at the beginning ) This was very interesting to read !

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  2. JessicaHowe says:
    25th February 2020 at 13:50

    this is amazing . I like the part were your walking in the forest because you described it really good . well done

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  3. EmmaWarwick says:
    27th February 2020 at 17:33

    This was a really good story but the doll scary

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