… I found a secret door bell .
I don’t no were it went. I WAS SO MERSTERIS I went don …
I gasped Blood dripping I to a pooled monster staring right in front of my screamed for help …
no one herd my I screamed and screamed a gen and a gen still nothing … 
good work but the second paragraph doesn’t make sense …..
You’ve got a few spelling mistakes on Know , mysterious , down and again , other than that I really like it !
Make sure your spellings are correct before you publish it