‘I’m trying to hold on!’ he shouted. Nick was hanging from a tree in the woods. He was scared. He didn’t know what to do! His friend Joe was standing there laughing and taking no notice that he would get badly injured instantly. ‘help me!!’ Nick screamed.
‘one second, i need to send it to everyone. This is hilarious!’ said Joe
Nick fell and broke his leg. After they both came out the hospital with Nick in a cast, Joe said sorry and they both took a quick ride in the wheelchair!
Dear Summer,
I loved how you used the prompt at the start. Just remember to use commas, brackets or dashes. Keep up the hard work!