Dear Diary,
Today we are counting the sheep so we can keep track of the breeding cycle. As we were feeding the cows we saw a big wasps nest on the wall that had been nocked down by the cows. We saw the queen lying dead so they all went angry at me and Ben. Soon after, we got in the house my grandad told me that we were getting a new quad bike (a Honda ) because our old one is very old and is broken. We were hoping it would be here next we as we need it desperately.
Hi Alex
I love your work but you could add some semi-colons but over all it was a very good and how you based it on what you love .