One windy day I went to visit my grandma but as soon as I stepped out of my door I seen a huge tornado ripping down house’s tearing billboards apart
Flinging cars into houses! When it was over I went to check my house just to see bricks all around, while I was looking for somewhere to live I saw a car in a house roof, the tornado must of carried it there if there was someone in there they definitely needed serious help, whilst looking for somewhere to sleep I came across an abandoned house I was stuck there…
Brilliant piece of writing but remember punctuation
A really creative way of bringing the prompt to life: a tornado. Great use of description too Noah and I felt lots of empathy for your character.
I agree with Daniel – make sure you support your wonderful writing with a greater focus on your punctuation.
Keep up the wonderful work!