100wc week#29 Anastazja

One ordinary day , me and my friend were walking from school ( like we usually do ) we would always look at this tiny house which looked pretty normal but one day … ” what’s that on the roof ” my friend asked .At first i didn’t see anything at all ! We went around to the front of the house to get a closer look . We had no idea what it was until we heard someone scream … we rushed inside the house and saw a little girl squashed up next to the couch shouting for help , we looked up at the ceiling and there was …

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1 Response to 100wc week#29 Anastazja

  1. Admin says:

    A good sense of excitement in your story through your description of action and some shorter sentences. Well done for including a range of punctuation too.

    Try to get a whole story in 100 words as well as leaving it open-ended.

    Keep up the great writing.

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