100wc week #16 Jessica

Once upon a time in a world full of unicorns and mermaidsĀ  .The unicorns love to climb tall mountian’s and they loveĀ  music the mermaids dance to slow music .They love sweets that’s were they live the guards to the castle are gummy bears and the neighbourhood houses were ginger bread houses the trees in the forest are cop sticks with chocolate . The unicorns always go see the mermaids in the see full of fruit loops . The unicorns help the mermaids up and turn them into princesses with there horns and the mermaids hop on there backs and fly up to the rainbow. The mermaids use the fruit loop’s as swimming hoops.

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1 Response to 100wc week #16 Jessica

  1. Hi Jessica,

    I really enjoyed imagining a world of unicorns, mermaids, dancing, music, rainbows, mountains and sweets. They are pretty much all of my favourite things and I could just imagine the mermaids hopping through the fruit loops, as you used some great descriptions to paint that picture in my mind.

    Well done,

    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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