One foggy morning, when I was driving home I seen a man in the middle of the road. He had my 2 children by his side!!! I stopped my car and asked
“Who are you?”
he replied with “Non of your business but it’s your fault I lost my job!”
“Mike?” I asked
He said “Maybye and if you don’t give me enough money to pay for life in the next 2 month your children get it.”
I asked “Ok, ok how much?”
He told me $1500!
I was in shock, but I give him the money and drove my children home. But on the last road there was a massive ramp…
How tragic Daniel! You took me on an emotional journey through your story – well done. Some good punctuation and description of circumstances.
Check your spellings before you publish next time.
Keep up the great writing!