THERE was a car in the window
I was walking to school until I found my friend so we walked to school together. When we got to school we where late ”why are you late? Is it because you where talking to much?”
”No because we were not talking!”
‘DETENTION BOTH OF YOU” shouted Mr . Walker. An hour later, I was in art class and we had to draw a dog in 20 minutes. the task was very difficult.
So after school we went to the school hall for detention. I was walking home and a sore a car in a roof…
A really good effort and well done for creating a good relationship between the main character and her friend.
Check you spelling next time – e.g. where should be were.
Keep up the great work!