In this moment I found what I dreamed of seeing … THE MOST HAUNTED HOUSE IN THE WORLD . The pain I felt in my soul I wanted to see it and what’s inside .I walked up the mountain and there it was . There was a doorbell and I pressed the end of my finger on it ….. There it was at this very moment the door opened . I pressed my foot on the creaky stairs and I heard music and there was another door and there were rainbow lights that I could see through the cracks of the door .There behind the door were dancing FROGS. Weird dream .
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