As I walked down the street, I saw a wooden box sat on the side of the road. I crept towards the mysterious box. I slowly picked it up.
It opened itself.
A piece of paper was inside. It had co-ordinates on the crooked, brown paper.
I followed the co-ordinates into a secretive building. It was pitch black.
I kept following the co-ordinates through doors and doors and doors until I saw one which was very special…
This one was special because it had a doorbell which looked like a owl’s eye. I pressed it and…
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very interesting but where it says doors and doors and doors you should put a semi colon good work
good use of punctuation it is fantastic