I was minding my own business until I heard a loud bang from outside. I had no idea what it was. There was nothing there to begin with but then I saw a cave.
It was covered top to bottom with so many different colours of crystals and a gargantuan, glistening diamond shining through my window. There was sapphire blue dragon guarding the entrance and two men stood on towers guarding the entry. I was so desperate to go inside. I had a plan. I called my friends to come and see for themselves. But I had to see what was inside…
great use of description Ollie Jack Marcus
good work friends from Niamh
Fantastic description but a weeny bit boring.
rude
jenifer is right but still good after all
Hello! Descriptions are great in your story. Your second paragraph describing all the colours was delightful. It made me want to go into the cave also. Well done.