Dear diary,
It was one dark night when me and my friend were in a gargantuan forest. As we were walking through the forest there was an abandoned antique house sitting all alone. As I saw the shape it was in it looked disgusting but I had to see what was inside… Suddenly, we heard a noise our legs shivered in the wind and had goose bumps as long as a tree! As quick as a flash, me and my friend sprinted out of the forest. Finally, we went to our house and tried to think what was that noise?
Great story but where is ‘but I had to look at what was inside.
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