100wc#6(21)alfie&brayden

One day, me and my fiends were on are ship we were far out. As I came to a old castle on a island we went closer as I jamp of the boat. I stood on one foot biting my finger nails I  thought I have to get closer. I tip toad but I had to see in side. there was canons guns the best thing there was a chest full of gold, chains and jems we went up stairs there was boarows swords axes the wall fell.The floor was all wet and slipy the floor had holes in it.

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2 Responses to 100wc#6(21)alfie&brayden

  1. GeorgeWarwick says:

    Good work but check the spelling of friends

  2. MarkussFilipovs says:

    boring looks good but check your spellings thx

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