100wc week#7 Lewis Tom

Posted on 21st October 2020 by TomArmstrong

One Saturday morning, I ate my breakfast and went through the town. I suddenly, saw a boy with a cool red scooter, a fluffy coat on and was on the concrete and then started to dance. An evil skeleton with a pumpkin  head jumped out of the tree . I sprinted to an abandoned house. It smelled of dead rats the skeleton   came through the door. I ran for my life up stairs. He followed me laughing really weirdly I found a smashed window so I risked my life and jumped out  screaming and shouted HELP but luckily I landed on the postman.

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7 Responses to 100wc week#7 Lewis Tom

  1. IslaWigham says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:32

    This is really funny but you forgot a comma after suddenly on the second sentence

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  2. MiaClifford says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:35

    After one Saturday morning you need a comma

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  3. OllieMcKeown says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:37

    Great use of description from Ollie and Marcus

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  4. JakeBeattie says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:38

    it was very good and liked how you ran for your life.

    from Jake

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  5. MajaJarema says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:38

    very mysterious !!!

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  6. JakeBeattie says:
    21st October 2020 at 14:42

    I liked how you done it for haloween

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  7. TomArmstrong says:
    3rd November 2020 at 17:30

    Thanks

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