As soon as I got up I heard a loud BANG! I was surprised when I walked out my bedroom and saw a huge hole in my roof. Me and everyone in my house were speechless . After that, I called the fire men and some police man to come and help. Shockingly, when they left they didn’t do anything they must of done something I thought so I waited and waited but nothing happened. If only it was a bit smaller it would of all been ok. However, in the end
we called another fire man and they fixed it!
Great use of fronted adverbials in your writing!