One day me and my friend were out on a ship sailing are ship and we see an old castle we get close it was a misty day so we had to be careful . It turned night time we were craft in beds we got there in the morning we were tiered we got of the boat and rolled of to the white castle. There were lots of leaves on the floor we went in the castle it was very posh there was gold in the vault and money we felt like taking some but we did not we went.
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https://longtownprimary.j2bloggy.com/Y5-100-Word-Challenge/100wc-week-1121-niamh-szymon/ Well done
We like how you were crafting boats and didn’t just have them. Have a look at our posthttps://longtownprimary.j2bloggy.com/Y5-100-Word-Challenge/wp-admin/post-new.php
There is lots going on in your story Alfie and Brayden, and you have manged to include all the prompt words very well. I like the way you tell your reader how you resisted temptation in the vault of the white castle. That must have been very hard to do!