100wcWeek#11(21)Ollie and Marcus

Posted on 18th November 2020 by OllieMcKeown

I woke up but not in my bed ,on the floor of a castle. I ended up rolling down a never ending staircase into a white cupboard. After a few minutes I woke up but all I could see was millions of tiny dots that I think were caused by the fall. I met this man called lieutenant Duncan asking how I got here. He took me to do some crafts made out of leaves.  I couldn’t really hear what lieutenant Duncan was saying so I had to read his lips! Suddenly I was back  in the 11th century(The Tudors) …

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3 Responses to 100wcWeek#11(21)Ollie and Marcus

  1. LewisLittle says:
    18th November 2020 at 14:14

    great we really liked how you used brakets

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  2. AlfieBil says:
    18th November 2020 at 14:14

    it is amazing the Tudors are amazing

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  3. Mrs. G. says:
    21st November 2020 at 16:21

    Ollie and Marcus,
    Your piece makes me think of the adventures Alice had in Wonderland. Did you collaborate on this piece? I am wondering how you decided to work together?
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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