One stormy night, the man himself Santa, sent an Elf to a random house. He had to self-isolate of course but once he was done with his Elfie lockdown, OH NO. When this lockdown was over you don’t want to know. SO STOP READING NOW READER OR BEWARE YOU CAN NEVER LOOK BACK. First he made the house a HAUNTED ONE . Next was the worst of all he made a henchman a TALKING CHRISTMAS TREE. Then, he scared the owners away as they had been here the whole entire time. Then a mysterious hallway appeared, should the Elf go in…
Look at ours
https://longtownprimary.j2bloggy.com/Y5-100-Word-Challenge/100wcweek14-tom-and-lewis/
like the bit in CAPITALS
Well done! It really draws the reader in when you say don’t read on. Also its very funny .
well done
why not visit ours?
https://longtownprimary.j2bloggy.com/Y5-100-Word-Challenge/100wcweek14-maja-jennifer/
We like how at the end you have used a rhetorical question.