I woke up in the middle of nowhere where a huge mysterious figure was stood in front of me holding a large machete covered in red blood. The mysterious creature wore a scarlet dress while staring at me with one missing eyeball!! It looked at me with its half burnt face. I didn’t know what to do so I didn’t call for help Luckily, it didn’t attack me because I was moving. There were vile little creatures that gathered around me. I couldn’t get past them so I looked for somewhere to get out of this mess. WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT …
Well done I really like how even though he didn’t know what to do but The creature didn’t see him as luck
Here have a luck at ours
https://longtownprimary.j2bloggy.com/Y5-100-Word-Challenge/wp-admin/post.php?post=1269&action=edit&doing_wp_cron=1607520100.1036069393157958984375
wrong link
https://longtownprimary.j2bloggy.com/Y5-100-Word-Challenge/100wcweek14-craig-and-jake/
I like how you have used capital letters and ellipsis at the end.
Why not visit ours?
https://longtownprimary.j2bloggy.com/Y5-100-Word-Challenge/100wcweek14-maja-jennifer/
i like the vocab it was really interesting to read