Today was a strange day walking along the road with my family hearing sirens all around us.We were wondering what was going on until we realised a vehicle had flew into a roof everyone was stood watching the emergency services strugling to get it out of the roof.They had to call the helicopter for support.They took the car out the roof and rushed to help the person inside. All he said was” he was fine but there were people inside “that was all he said to the fire brigade so then they rushed into the house hold to help the people
A good story with great structure and a clear plan. Well done for including some speech punctuation and description. Next time, try to start your sentences in different ways – e.g. As they stood gawping at the car, …
Keep up the great writing!