This morning we had to move out of our house for a weird reason…
Today wasn’t normal…
We woke up this morning and had breakfast like we normally would. Everything was fine until we heard some noises that sounded like planes crashing into enormous buildings on the TV. We turned it off.
Later that day, I was going into my bedroom to watch the TV news. I saw what was happening and freaked out; ran downstairs and told my mother “mum,mum cars are falling out of the sky onto peoples houses”. All of a sudden it happened to us.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Great punctuation and tone to your piece of writing with ‘freaked out’ and very creative with it raining cars! Could you use a thesaurus to improve words like ‘enormous’?
Keep up the great writing.