As I was walking down the street with my best friend Zak I sin an old man struggling to get in his car so me Zak went to say are you ok we definitely something was up so we help the man into his car .
As me Zak were going to the pantomime were going past a very large football club man u that we both sport we were so sad that we couldn’t goo in .But gess wh0 we sin man u player Pogpa . He was doing all the there triks me Zak eyes were inpresed but we had to go now bye football players see you on the pich
Hi Dan
I like how you have based it on football but you are using slang words and your full stop at the end .