Dear Diary,
Today (the best day ever at school) we made rockets out of water bottles and made them fly by shaking them until they burst and flew. I designed my rocket with stripes, spots and it was coloured green, red and the rim was yellow with black spots. We had a competition to decide who had the best rocket. My rocket won the competition (only just) and when it was time to fly them we lined up outside .I was first and when it just wouldn’t take off (I was losing all hope) of it went!
I like your story well done charlie.