THE DAY I HELPED BE MCANIC
As I was about to take some tools away I was asked to take the wheel of a car it was my time to shine as I was taking the bolts out it dropped luckily I caught it . It was heavier than I expected a new disc was needed so my second job was to help dad put it on the bolts started rolling down the drive way and they nearly went down the drain so I jump and caught them I was lucky they never went down I was just about to put the tire back on the car and I got a fright a big black cat ran by and shocked me …
You have spelt mechanic wrong
Neave
This is good but you need more punctuation as I needed to take a lot of breaths