T0 Queen Bee
I would like to come and work for you I am great at : cleaning , washing the dishes and Laudery. When I was a little bee I loved watching you on beetv . Always dreamed of being you, I used to dress up as you . It would be a dream to be your servant you your majesty . I can work all day and night and never get tried . Please make my wish come true I would love my application to be excepted from Zoe .
one week later…
You have being accepted thank you from Queen Bee .
You start Monday .
Dear, Libby
I really like how you have write as a bee it would make sense more if you do all day and night than all night and day but on the other hand its a good! Keep up the good work.:)
Libby your writing made me laugh about the beetv you writing is brilliant and enthusiastic and has good imagination I like your use of description and adjective keep up the good work libbyB. : )