to day was the day that i got my driving licencee after 28 trice as i was going home something that was not there before a big hill i did not see it at first but as i was driving i sore a car go over it they made it past the house that was in frote of the hill i thinck they were perfeselnce because when i had a go it ended bad at lesd i did not get hert this is how it terd out
a wonderful effort ellie i liked the theme of the story and the links between 28 tries and the rest of the story
Why is my comment above hard to read?
Keep up the great writing!