It was 1999 when a little boy started to feel butterflies his stomach he felt really ill, when he told his parents they thought he was faking all the crying and screaming…
Weeks later, his parents took him to the hospital because he wouldn’t stop complaining, when a doctor finally looked at him he knew that he was in serious pain. After this, he took the little boy into the x-ray room no one could believe what he had in his stomach there were 10 worms, 11 spiders and even 5 butterflies in there! If only they listened to that little ill boy.
My goodness what a lot of strange things to find in a tummy, no wonder he felt so ill. I really enjoyed this story, it made me giggle! I particularly liked the way you used an ellipsis… to engage the reader and make them want to read on. Keep writing.
Michelle (team 100) Northern Ireland