One dark night in Bells field a menice robber Jim had just broke into my friend’s house and stole a bag of loot . He always breaks in around midnight because he knew everyone would be asleep .Jim had scarlet red hair a fluffy coat and always danced to everyones house. If jim isn’t happy he will go on his scooter and drive on the concrete. One night after the robbery of Christians house he was named the phantom thief and his logo was a fox head with a lightning bolt through .The house was robbed but the poliece found him because of the siren and was sent to jail…
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Great use of all the words but spelling police .
great story but you spelt police wrong
good but why jail
Hi Jack
I think you have used the words of the prompt very well in this week’s 100 word challenge. Your description of the character, Jim the robber, was excellent and I could see him in my mind with his red hair and his fluffy coat dancing his way to his next robbery. The idea of him going on the concrete driving his scooter if he isn’t happy brought a smile to my face. I’m wondering was the siren on the scooter or was there an alarm on the house. I’m also wondering what happened next???? Well done! I really enjoyed reading this very creative 100 word challenge.
Máire O’Keeffe (Team 100wc) Galway Ireland
hi Maire o keeffe the siren was from the house as he was breaking in THANKS FOR THE GREAT COMMENT